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Submitted: December 28, 2004
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Trifold exsistanceby =lazesummerstone

Manga & Anime / Digital Media / Paintings

It is now 4 in the morning, the rain is coming down and the atmosphere is perfect for such a drawing as this. These are the 3 characters, if you look at the gallery, you'll see elements of each one slowly developing. The really really tall girl is around 6'11 or so, in case anyones wondering.
Is it possible to make a comic that touches on science's race tword the unification theory or the theory of everything? I want to try.

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*Ghanie Jul 21, 2005

I simply love your munsters! Great imagination!

~ahhelga Jul 4, 2005

This totally looks so different from your finalized one. Great job! Very well done!

thats me
ahhelga
aka Pauline

~antisora Mar 10, 2005 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Wow I really love the alien things' eyes.

~onlyrax Jan 27, 2005

Dear sweet god I love this. I'll admit -- what first brought me to your account was your icon (such a kickass icon, by the way). But this is fucking incredible. I love the characterization apparent in every being. The design of the furthest-back creature is really great -- I love the glowing/streaming eyes and the roped-off head, not to mention the two teeth that stick out just that little bit. You've got an amazing eye for detail. The girl's stiff, unfriendly stance is quite telling as well, not to mention her somewhat awkward expression. But my favorite has got to be the kid with the juice box. His expression is priceless and I ADORE that he's yanked the straw out of his juice box. When I was younger I would always do that during lunch and take the straw with me to my next class to bother people with. Anyway -- sorry to split off on a tangent -- this is a fantastic piece, so much so that I may be forced to contact one of my credit-card-enabled friends and pester them to purchase me a print. I just get such a mood from this... Sorry to ramble on with no critique, but I like it too much.

~ninamo Jan 5, 2005

I don't really trust Gregory's alien friend....

~lordlancaster Jan 5, 2005

Really cool concept, and I like the results.

~seel-dingo Jan 1, 2005

woah...this is so cool......
i bet you make a shitload of money off of prints, coz all of your art is simply amazing XD;;

i think the monsters on the right and left are the coolest looking ones :>

=lazesummerstone Jan 1, 2005 Professional Digital Artist

haha thanks but actually I've only sold one print to someone
Most of my sales are to myself, deviantart makes some good quality prints!

~seel-dingo Jan 1, 2005

wow....really only one?!?! that's weird... o___o;;

*sayda Dec 30, 2004

Thats very nice ^__^ I love the creatures in the background, they are wonderfully done and colored as well :3 The characters are great as well ^__^ I especially love the littler boy with the juice box, such a nice little detail!

Now, for some critiques since it looks as though you are looking for it X3 Everything in this image look really well done, the only thing that catches my eye is the way the girl is drawn. She seems almost like a 'pole', she's very VERY stiff and straight. So much so that it looks as though she doesn't even have a neck o_o; I think that's because her shoulders are raised up so high that they meet chin level. Some things that you might want to keep in mind for the next time you go about drawing a character like this from that angle; On the human body, the head of a person actually sticks out forward from the rest of the body, your head is not actually directly above your shoulders but actually slightly infront of :3 With her head being so straight up with the rest of her body, it gives her that stiff look. For some good reference of this you might want to check out * One-Vox's gallery, he at times exagerates this feature on his characters. :3
Also, shoulders always sag downward slightly, they end of the shoulder rests usually at the bast of the neck ^_^ unless you were doing this on purpous for the character, then don't mind me c_C;;;
And lastly, as just a personal notation, maybe giving her more of an 'attitude' in her stance would help give her less of that stiff pole look. The other two characters show a lot more attitude in the way they are standing, you can tell the middle boy is putting more weight on one leg then the other. Bend her knees a little, move the hands some, simple things like that ^_^ *that I'm sure you are well aware of anyways c_c;;;*

So yeah...thats my critique for you c__C Hope I wasn't being too overbearing and such, I've noticed that sometimes when I do this, even with the Advanced Crit on, people just tell me I'm being picky, rude, and negative ;_; So yeah...hope I helped some ^__^ Your work is still amazing and is a big inspiration :3 Keep it up!

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